Editing credit on this monologueish page goes to my amazing wife, Rachel. She takes my awful sounding dialogue and turns it into something wonderful. Thanks, baby!
Space-Mullet
A Sci-Fi Webcomic by Daniel Warren Johnson
Editing credit on this monologueish page goes to my amazing wife, Rachel. She takes my awful sounding dialogue and turns it into something wonderful. Thanks, baby!
Nice silhouette in the last panel!
Thanks Ivan!
Yes, the negative space is nice. And it also let’s us know how close Forthe is to being disarmed and surprised by that space trucker.
You Never know!
Whoa, whoa, whoa. Props, rachel! Some really exciting lines in there.
Dan- you did well, too.
Seriously, this page adds a ton of excitement AND important facts without seeming as if you are doing it intentionally! So Good! You’re a kick-ass team! Can’t wait for Thursday!!!
Nick, I read your post to Rachel, she says thanks a ton! It’s good to know we handled that sequence well. I was sweating it for a few weeks.